Ray Bradbury would be proud of this first chapter. I like the build up to your final sentence and all the atmosphere that winds its way through these pages. You've built the beginnings of a rich, dystopian world, and I'm looking forward to what comes next!
I'm calling it: Phung = budding novelist to watch in 2014
ReplyDeleteRay Bradbury would be proud of this first chapter. I like the build up to your final sentence and all the atmosphere that winds its way through these pages. You've built the beginnings of a rich, dystopian world, and I'm looking forward to what comes next!
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